Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

The worth of water

Missing image




Childhood memories
keep me believing
in life’s simplest pleasures ~
like a rainy afternoon
lost in a backyard dream

where I was washed to shore
in footprint puddles
that came alive
with pretty tales
and wishes

that still seem real
every time the April winds
fall into my space

and move me

Author notes

picture prompt

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Leonura
    October 20
    Edit | Reply
    A verra lovely poem! such sweet and moving words. Brought such a wonderful picture ot life.

  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    October 19

    Edit | Reply
    this is absolutely wonderful.. the words flow beautifully and the image that you've created with your words is fantastic.

    good luck in the contest

    kat


  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    October 1

    Edit | Reply
    You have captured the crown my queen of beauty, there is something about this that spoke to me more than anything I have read today, perhaps it is the softness or the memories a write like this conjurs. Best to you in the contest


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    September 29

    Edit | Reply

    excellent~

    Love the imagery in this poem
    You have followed the prompt perfectly to go with the pic and contest
    Best of luck in the contest
    BTW when you get time I got some new ones up too
    Hope you drop by
    Hugs
    Susan~~~