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Dear Sweetheart

Dear sweetheart Emily
How are you ? And do you remember me ?
I hope everything’s fine your way, I cannot stop thinking of you as I write this now
Oh! god I miss you somehow.

You like disappeared without saying goodbye, don’t you know I love you so much ?
Don’t you remember you said “I love you & I’ll always stay in touch” ?
I waited and waited for your email so that I would get a chance to reply
But days and months passed by without any sign & tears flown through my eyes it made me cry.

I exactly don’t know if you used to miss me then what made you remain clam ?
Have I ever treated you bad or your trouble I have become ?
I wanted to hear from you I waited for that mail to come and forgive me ‘cause for a while I was dumb
But after you left and after all this time I felt lonesome.

I wish I could go back in time when you and I were connected
Those memories left behind are trapped in my head and they will never fade.
I was on my way to write a poem on you but I couldn’t complete without feeling your presence
My mind could not go poetic with your absence.

Emily from the day you met me till this day I kept you in my prayers
Yes I wish everything good for you and nothing less
It’s been over a year now I wonder if this came to an end
As I think of you hoping you will prove me wrong and be my pen friend.

I’m going crazy without you, I’m addicted!
I cannot forget you and never will. Every day, every hour your name resounds in my head.
I miss your sweet words that lightened up day
Emily I really miss you & I love you even if you don’t feel about me the same way.

I’m not seducing you to continue with me
Let it be only your wish so throw it on my face and I will agree
Of course it’s your life you’re young and free
No one can force you and change the way you want it to be
And yes I would never like to see you unhappy.

You know my email address its shuberth@rediffmail.com
So feel free to throw it on my face let it explode like an atom bomb
Tell me if I ever hurt your feelings and I don’t know about or if I’m wrong
I’ll be waiting for your reply no matter if it’s very short or long.

Remember! Writing this I mean no offence and no harm
So dear don’t get me wrong, in my heart there is nothing but love for you & you’re always welcome!
No matter this world think I’m crazy and may they laugh
But Emily it’s you I’ll always love.

I’ll keep you locked in my brain
Even if we may won’t unite again
Emily you’re beautiful you’re the thought that occupies my mind
To know who you are and what you’ve been to me I don’t have to go rewind
Deep inside me you will always be the sweetest girl and my as my friend
Now, today, tomorrow and till the end.

Shuberth

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Written: 26 September 2008 Friday, 12:22:38 AM @ 21

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  • Velvet Rose Petals
    November 18
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    beautifully written. hopefully you get your reply you have long waited for!
    Rose

  • realist07
    October 25

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    ok this is very long and that is the great part about poetry it stops when you want it to stop. However, please do not take this the wrong way but it didnt really keep my attention i think the flow could have been better and the voc could have been better what i mean by that. Is that as a writer you must have a dictionary and find new intellegent words . I am confused is this a letter to a real person? I am sorry but it wasnt your best but please continue to write i have alot of peices that are not my best please keep writing use methaphores


  • Abner
    October 25

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    you amaze me each time i check your page..
    thanks for sharing i love every words of it and i hope things turn good for you my dearest friend.

  • depressedangelchick
    October 18

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    i think that was really sweet of you to write a poem to emily and i hope that she reads this someday and starts to acknowledge you again.

  • Legend silver member
    October 16

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    Ah love that old devil can create havoc with ones life The pain that accompanies it sometimes seem unbearable Then out of the blue a new love raises its head and suddenly we wonder why we even got upset over the lost one A fine emotional piece Well done you expresses your feelings well


  • petalblue2
    October 9

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    This is touching and sentimental, but I do have a difficult time really seeing it as a poem. Really a successful and beautiful letter though. Very nicely expressed, and sincerely emotional.


  • afroqban
    October 8
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    oh i have been there, wish i couldve read this at that time. awesome write


  • EmoAngel13
    October 4

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    wow its very emotional

    i realluy like it and i can relate, and if she isn't replyin by now it may b best to just let her go,i've been thru this w/ 2 ppl. if u ever wanna tlk mi emali is lillymccormick53@yahoo.com
    feel free to email me any time


  • hidden-in-the-dark
    October 3

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    wow very emotional; sweet too
    very sweet i liked it
    my names emily just spelled emalie. so it was kinda like reading a letter to me just not to me...but ya it was great!
    wish you the best!
    -emalie


  • Jaypawlover
    October 1
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    It was very touching and emotional... I hope you are able to talk or work something out.

  • hotgurl
    September 30

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    I liked it.

    I thought it was touching, and if i were Emily, i probably would cry or laugh. It is very nice, but a little spellng error in the paragraph that starts out with And remember... did want to say mean instead of meat?

    Overall i liked it and think that it was very well done. i hope that she replies when she gets it. Good luck!


  • RuLives4GodOnly silver member
    September 30

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    I know it hurts sweetheart but you have to let her go. If she hasn't been replying to your emails by now, maybe it's in your best interest to move on with life; there are plenty of other fish in the sea and you holding onto her is only causing you sleepless nights and lukewarm memories. I want you to be happy but you can't be if she occupies your mind. It's best if you move on and forget about her.

  • Lonely
    September 30

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    This is an emotional write.. I hope with all my heart that things will be okay with you, and she will get this.. She must know how special she is. and how special you are. Keep writing

    Peace


  • lianna27
    September 29
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    i really like all the emotion in this...i hope it will help and wish u the best
    -lindsay

  • DOgTaGz-CDTSGTKayla
    September 29
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    That was good. Hopefully things will work out and be for the best.Goodluck!


  • peregrin
    September 29

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    OH,
    Wow,
    That is a pretty hard thing to read, with the emotion being so real. I guess I can relate to it, just in a different way. Wow though, this is pretty touching.


  • Broken - gurl
    September 29

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    I could feel the emotion that you are feeling and I too feel the same way about a certain person and this is such a good poem you must be so sad that you have not spoke in almost a year I know what you are feeling because this happens to me all the time I'm always thinking of that one special person In my life. this is so sweet the emotion the effort you've put into it! I love it and if i was Emily I'd be on the phone now saying how much i loved it. you have talent and I'm not just saying that i love this poem keep it up.

    All my love..x Natasha


  • faderman1959
    September 29

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    I could feel your emotions coming through honestly and clearly. You have laid it out there and can only hope for a response.

    I wish you all the best with this but I fear the her silence is your answer. Its been over a year and not a word. Sadly you are torturing yourself with hanging on. Just move on. If its meant to be you will hear from her again, if not you are wasting your life.

  • DaughterofGod08-09
    September 29

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    wow! this is really beautiful and full of emotions. I love this letter a lot and i really hope that emily loves it to. it is really powerful and really shows that you care for her and love her. and like i said i hope she loves the letter to!

  • GlisteningWinter
    September 29

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    aaaawwww, this is one heck of a beauitful mowing emotional mind blowing love letter
  • Topnotchsy
    September 29
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    Powerful, emotional write. I imagine many can relate to this.


  • maktub
    September 29

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    there are a few typos...But other than that I really undestand, and feel what you are going through. An emotionally strong write...wow...But man oh man do I feel for you...I can say, that there is one person in my life I care about that much, and it would be so terrible, so awful, if he were to stop writing/communicating to me, or I to him.
    Regardless,
    well done,
    good wrote.


  • Manish
    September 29

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    This partly relates to me. I really appreciate your writing style and of course your feelings towards your friend. I can feel your poem - it's beautiful! (Read it again cos there's some spelling error - 'And remember writing this I MEAN no offence and no harm') Thank you so much for sharing this very personal write of yours.


  • Celticpoet gold member
    September 29

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    Melancholy

    They say that Love is wasted on the young...and this may be true!...for like fine wine Love improves with age...so take my advice poet and taste the fruits of many vines before deciding which one suits your palate best!...always look on the bright side and enjoy the memories you have of those you have loved and cast off any negative feelings or they may poison your soul!...I wish you luck in life and love...regards Dan.

  • Kira Lover
    September 29

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    SO EMOTIONAL

    I really liked it; its sad and emotional. I think its sweet and hope too find your true love.

    ~Chow


  • Black Narcissus silver member
    September 29
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    Very sad and very, very moving..


  • Glenn
    September 29

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    It is as painful as knife!

    Yet another sad kind of a poem.
    i love it!!!! it totally took me on an emotional journey...i usually lose interest in very long poems quickly but i was avoiding blinking just to continue reading this poem...you convey emotions so well...you're a very talented writer...you make the reader feel what's written...it's a great quality and one that few can master...don't ever lose it...

    you shared your dearm, and which turned to be a nice poem. your flow is excellent.I really like this piece, sounds like you worked hard on it...

    ""Hoping So your sweet Haert Emily dont misses this one""


    it's all amazing!
    Great write and thanks for sharing this poem.


    Glenn

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