chorus
The dance of two lovers,
where time stands still.
The near kiss he holds her,
as though readying for the kill.
She closes her eyes,
as she feels his breath so near.
and sighs as he kisses her,
past her lips and lights upon her ear.
Eyes on fire,
he looked into my soul.
He held me in his embrace,
where love unfolds.
My form was in flight,
as my mind gave in.
A time where
the near kiss never ends.
chorus
The dance of two lovers,
where time stands still.
The near kiss he holds her,
as though readying for the kill.
She closes her eyes,
as she feel his breath so near.
and sighs as he kisses her,
past her lips and lights upon her ear.
Feeling his breath ,
yet lips like butterfly wings.
Such a sense of life,
directed by lust it did bring.
The time between wanting and knowing,
drives a woman wild .
The time of the near kiss,
heaven wears a smile.
Minds on fire,
unable to control.
finds two becoming as one,
within the nights glow.
Within the kiss,
where two becomes lost,
far from thought indeed
its a place where lovers pay the cost.
where their reputation loses the toss.
chorus
The dance of two lovers,
where time stands still.
The near kiss he holds her,
as though readying her for the kill.
She closes her eyes,
as she feels his breath so near.
and sighs as he kisses her,
past her lips and lights upon her ear.
Copyrights **Patty DeGroff 9-29-08
Author notes
I dont know if this is what you were looking for but I decided to write one just to see
If put into a song let Riftkin on this sight know right away
In a list
A contest entry
- Pen me a song ( contest ) by Riftkin.
725 points, ended October 5, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Laughing .. A place where reputation loses the toss.. I love that line.. How much passion is shown through out the piece with out stooping to any vulgarity..
True romance..
I would love to hear it when the words are sung
Den -
Great song!
most deserving of a gold trophy.
Your skills are limitless.
Heaven wears a smile is a very good line.
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Wow!!!
This song is amazing!!! Wow!!! So passionate and romantic. You can almost feel the near kiss with the way you described it. Put it to music! You should sell it! It reminds me of my first kiss, and the near kiss of mine.
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Hot Damn Ma , lol
Now that is an old fashioned love song for sure. The best kind, they don't write em like that much anymore and thats ashamed. Really a very good writing of some excellent lyrics. This is really good stuff if you ask me.
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A passionate romantic song, it deserved the gold award.
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Put this to music and sell it
for it is the perfect love song.
Riftkin
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beayutiful could imagine this as a slow waltz
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very nice
It's a very sweet love song you got here my friend! let's see if we can this thing to music now and make some cash! l.o.l. j.k. really sweet piece.
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lovley and romantic i could almost feel it, well done and good luck in the contest.
stay happy always xx
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nicely written. Good job here.
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So nice . Like a wonderful song and dance for the good old days. You brought them back even if only for a moment.
My you brought the past back & it is so nice . even if just for a little time.
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I like this song, the images are vivid and filled with passion. I could imagine the couple as they danced and kissed, very beautiful and vivid poem.
best of luck in the contest! <3
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Seeing as I've been in a rather romantical mood, this poem hit the spot to me. It kept the feeling of suspense in my chest, like when you kiss a guy for the first time...I guess that was the point Anyhow, I really liked this good job and good luck in the contest!
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