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devil's dance

They sky turned red
And the fields ignited

Demons danced in circles
Beckoning me forward

I tried to fight them
I prayed for God to help me
But I couldn't resist
I was sucked into thir dance
Then thrown

Feeling ashamed of what I had done
I wrapped up my wounds and ran back to the church.
I tried to get in
But I was thrown out

I passed by a mirror and saw no reflection
I stepped into the sun
And almost died
Because this was the beginning of
my eternal life

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  • Maldronah
    September 29
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    I liked this very much.
    Would you care to share
    a cup of fresh blood?