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Her Eyes

Missing image
A tender passionate soul
Wide-eyed dreams and goals
A heart full of love ready to burst
Creating in me an unquenchable thirst

A soul full of holy, precious light
All seen in eyes, beautiful and bright
Big and beautiful as a baby’s eyes
Show a childlike heart who tells no lies

Eyes that saw into my soul and heart
Eyes that drew me inside from the start
Eyes to love, Eyes to behold,
Eyes that call me to a body to hold

With soft tenderness, she lets me embrace
A beautiful body and a fabulous face
What joy and romance she gives away
Beckoning my heart and soul to stay

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  • Paloszoo gold member
    October 7

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    This picture is captivating as is this passionate poem that fits it beautifully. This was a very lovely read. The meter and rhyme was nice, which made the read that much more enjoyable! Well done!

  • Rose Angel gold member
    October 1

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    Ah, your smile and hers!

    A lovely write, beautiful rhyming and flow, Mel..And if love has come your way, I am so happy. You look as if you have met your waterloo. Delighted...I have been praying for you. What a tribute to her!


  • michellemybelle gold member
    September 30

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    Eyes can be so intreguing, inviting...or not. Nice poem about eyes that can haunt the romance in your soul, I like the pic also.
    Hope your week is going well so far!

    love,
    Michelle