these blades of grass brings so much back
these blades of grass make me feel lack
blade of grass draw acrossed my skin
these blades of grassmake me feel i've sinned
these blades of grass reveil a wicked deed
these blades of grass watch me bleed
these blades of grass glow under neath the sun
these blades of grass watch as i was shunned
these blsdes of grass make me feel i'v lost
these blades of grass show how much it cost
these blades of grass look like a tiny leaf
these blades of grass show what i've tried to beary
these blades of grass make me feel wrong oh so very
blades of grass so green, and small make me forget what should be gone!?!
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-Well Done
I like the blades of grass concept... Very alluring use of phrase.. I like how you ended the piece as well! You need to double check your grammar, but other than that... AMAZING WRITE!!!
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yes i get to excited and my grammer slips a bit this peice is about my past blades of grass most of my poems come from my past i just put them into words
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...Emotion...I enjoy that...
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