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The Dream

World of a billion actors;

a million different tales.

Never stopping at familiar,

dedicated to forgotten trails.

Emotive from experience,

reticent from denial;

lips kissing sun-drenched wind,

underneath a boardwalk mile.

Sing to me of desert treasures,

tickle me with glacial pleasures.

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  • Rheea gold member
    October 9
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    You are amazing

  • I love that this all rhymes.

    It does not happen often with an acrostic, I tell thee that!

    I'd like to be an actor...

    (Dunno what wanderlust is though.. am I naive?)