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The Monument

I have become the monument
The broken toes
Inebriated in a temple debt

These moanings crept
Into the wooden wounds
And I have quenched your thirst

You are the arrogant soldier
Sent to the trenches
You return silver

To my yellowing fingertips
I am the monument
Expressionless as my master

Who wriggles with glee
In a retirement village
As I bury thee

In the tar eaten ground
You are death
As are so many of my men

Yielding axes to tear at my
Stone flesh
I am the monument of men

Who depress easily
And pop pills
Fraying at the edges

I will never embody you
And you lie
Stoned in the ground where you belong.

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  • Sunset Dreamer
    October 1
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    oooo*twiddles fingers in delight

    This is excellently written, slightly above my intellect this early in the morning, but amazing all the same. i especially like the last line. "stoned in the ground where you belong" because it has so much depth to each meaning that could be chosen. keep on keepin on! ♥K