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Heroin

Heroin is the worst addiction you can have.
The thing is if u are an addict this will more than likely be your life story.

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  • -ButterflyCuts-
    October 6
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    did you make the video?
    • invisoman
      October 7
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      No but i wish i did cuz someone in my family really needs to see this video and listen to the song but i cant get her to

  • InsanityDies
    October 2
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    Hey...honey...lol *laughs at using honey so soon*

    nice poem...i guess...but next time try and write one...you promise you said you will tell me some poetry,lol. But im lovin the vid.

    -Misa-
    P.S. you better be with me saturday *pout* since ur skipping out on school. *rolls eyes*

    Cherrio Jacob

    • invisoman
      October 7
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      I wish you could be with me tomorrow cuz Im going to a bad...i mean band concert lol. Im sorry i will be leaving early as usual Thursday. but see you ASAP "honey" lol

  • Warrior7 gold member
    October 2

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    Welcome To Allpoetry

    Hi invisoman

    You are so very right with your first line.
    The YouTube video clip was made cleverly in the fact that you don't actually see the young man shooting up but you know what's going on. Thanks for sharing
    Keep writing


  • malvolio
    October 1
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    Where's the poem?
    • invisoman
      October 7
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      listen to the song and you'll see and if u want a real poem written by me read one of my others
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