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Back to front

When lying back to back it's not the same
You find the fun has disappeared from view
They say the global bankers are to blame
But now it's hair not lips I've pressed to you

Recession hits my pocket every day
I can't afford the fun I love so much
But why am I denied the chance to play
Let's turn around so lips and parts can touch

This ninety six is not the game for me
I want to feel your lips rewarding me

Author notes

o the recent recession, the sexual position '69' is now to be known as 96.

Apparently even the cost of eating out has gone up!

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  • Shakes-spear
    October 2
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    Inflation

    I thought that meant a new boob job!

    69 to 96, Republican or Democrat it doesn't matter, that's just wrong!

    Good job on the write and good luck in the contest! The Shaker

  • Mairi bheag gold member
    October 1

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    I always thought "69" was when you bit the bottom off your cornet and stuck one of the chocolate wafers up the aperture!

    (as if )



  • PassionsPromise gold member
    October 1
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    Im stunned and well...
    Canat believe this

    good luck
    its all about winning


    Passions