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P.R.E.T.T.Y GiRl

Pretty girl
Used & A/b/u/s/e/d

Sex & d-irt-y thoughts

 

Used for y-o-u-r plesure

Her love never [[returned]]

 

She wants to be loved

She >wants< to be treated s.p.e.c.i.a.l

Isnt e-ver-y girl a [[p/r/i/n/c/e/s/s]]

 

[♥]Controlling[♥]

[*]Emotionaly--abusive[*]

Theses a.r.e the guys she >>>attracts

 

Pretty girl

Used & A/b/u/s/e/d

N!e!v!e!r loved

 

She w.a.n.t.s love not sex...

She w/a/n/t/s love not...

She w*a*n*t*s love...

 

 

[♥]Love[♥]

 

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  • Midnight-x-Rose gold member
    November 11

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    I know what you mean by some truth to this, as I can relate to this as well, only difference is that I'm not pretty... but this write seems so real for me as these are the guys I seem to attract and when I find someone good like my present boyfriend I fear spoiling it due to thinking he'll turn out like them... beautifully wrote, so raw and it hits home completely with me.

  • rockinruler
    October 9
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    Oops forgot to put select the three happy men


  • rockinruler
    October 9

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    Woow

    You've actually been able to write touching words and transform them into arrows that pierce into the heartI absolutely loved it dear

  • CarlosBernard
    October 8
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    last few lines was like WOW!!! i
    like it

  • Lowercase Prelude gold member
    October 7

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    wow
    this was emotionally stunning
    a sad write indeed

    and it is unfortunate when things like this occur


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    October 5

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    i never read dirty pretty and always were very curious even if its worth my time sort of lyrics but i must admit if this is dirty pretty it is damn good dirty pretty to impress me nice job writer very good poetry


  • JustsimplyKatiee.
    October 4
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    Oh my gosh! This is really sad.
    But an amazing write!
    x[[♥]]x

  • notyetfree
    October 4
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    This makes me want to give u a !!!

  • a lOvE lOsT
    October 2

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    tears fallin'

    wow this really emotional for me as well you..i love its soo sad but it speak loud and gets the point across....i love this poem it reminds me of myself....if you wanna talk im her ...really i am...
  • ladybug27
    October 2

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    awww this is a really sad write. I feel so bad for you. If you need to talk im here.

    lady
    p.s. do you remember me?
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