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My Vampire

Hands cold as they touch my neck,
Lips cold as they explore my body,
Cold teeth shallow in my neck,
Everything cold but the heart,

Tall and pale and all I could ever dream of...

My Vampire

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  • ScarletFox
    October 2
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    Nice.

    Very Good sango. Keep up the Great Work!


  • xDemonicxAngelx
    October 2

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    This is short, but very powerful. I quite like this as it is different from other poems. I think that you did a great job with this. Keep up the good work!

    Take care