Within your sleep you gurgle
as I watch your face at rest,
chubby cheeks like a rose in bloom
for truly I am blessed.
Your scent so sweet I'm in a trance
there's nothing to compare,
inhaling your innocent beauty
of which you're completely unaware.
And as you slowly waken
your eyes are rivetted to mine,
a surge of love tugs at my heart
to me all others you outshine.
A smile then flits across your face
lighting up my world,
your feet start kicking furiously
as your fingers around mine curl.
As I gather you into my arms
and kiss your softest skin,
I am reminded of a life
that I have helped begin.
You're the beacon of the future
growing tall and proud as leafy oak,
for you I'll give my heart of love
may this be your safety cloak.
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A contest entry
- Imagery by MissyMouse.
450 points, ended October 10, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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What a lovely depection of a mother and child. So heartfelt and beautiful in every way.
You're the beacon of the future
growing tall and proud as leafy oak,
for you I'll give my heart of love
may this be your safety cloak.
I only hope if I'm ever a mother I can be half as lovely as the one in this poem. Thank you for this entry. The images in each line are also very apparent which is exactally what I was looking for. You're an admirable poet. Best of luck in this contest.
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Thank you so much for your beautiful comments and applause on thie piece
They are greatly appreciated!
Gaylene
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Wouldn't every child love a dedication like this to begin life, sadly not enough get one. I love the soft and gentle flow. Best to you in the contest
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A tender and thoughtful write, full of warmth and a splendid use of title. I like the imagery and flow of this one. most well done.
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