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~ Freckles ~

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My flickering eyes
   playing  tic-tac-toe

      with your freckles.

Wondrous bits of
heavenly spackling
upon your nose &
scattered round-about

      your

      tanned cheeks

with -spot-on- beauty
endowing
your bare shoulders.

 

Is it that I love
those firefly freckles
more than those
      dark

       pistachio eyes?

Truth be told-
they complement
one another

Like a brisk autumn night
       and a fanciful

      Harvest Moon.

To you perhaps
    -just freckles-

To me……..

~Perfection~

 

 

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  • Asdzaa Nadleehe silver member
    October 7

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    Both my girls have freckles and I just adore them...smiles
    Another beautiful write...
    Many blessings
    ~A~



  • I thought let me read few wonderful poets..you are one of them
    Ah..the tenderful momments are crafted with the heart warming poetry my friend..my best wishes..Goodluck...

  • notorious
    October 4

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    I actually find freckles a huge turn-off,
    but I like this poem.

    Jessica

  • this made me *sigh..
    lovely

    Juls