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Lovers Lullaby.

 
Tracing sighs of passion
eyes soak in the sensual sensation
of a lovers lullaby.
 
awakening delectable desires
intense sumptuous inclination
tantalizing impulsive majestic bliss


Gripping shadows of curvaceous sin,
moans of enticement
seek permission




Tongues stimulates virginal release
mutual oral fixation satisfies
teasing mammilla's till erect.

 
Smoothing skin
with faked innocence
frustrated lips discharge

feverish, as the lick of petals, plunges
body quivers in orgasmic ecstasy 
loving gentle caresses
 
 
Wanton desires tremble along
gyrating hips, as fingers devile
into scented shadows of
liquefied cravings.
 
 
 

Author notes

Stanzas 1,3,5 & 7 - Angelflower
Stanzas 2,4 & 6 - Sensual Angel


mammilla - nipple
Prompt 2 & 3

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  • Jeremy0826 gold member
    October 10

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    This is great! I can't believe
    that you only got an HM for this one.
    Lovely presentation and background
    here. Thanks for sharing it!




    Jeremy0826

  • storiesuntold gold member
    October 5
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    Written very well

    Congradulation on the trophy


  • Silent Cougar Moderators member
    October 4

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    should Daddy be reading this...

    no matter what, it was well written by the both of you, and should catch the attention of all who read well.


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    October 4

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    Beautifully done!! You've made this passionate with sensual imagery, yet still maintaining class and depth of feeling!


  • Rheea gold member
    October 4
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    Throwing the closet door wide open watching everyone dance out amazing and beautiful.


  • KayJay silver member
    October 4

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    Very erotic... a perfect combination of sensuality and imagery... love the "scented shadows of
    liquefied cravings"... had me drooling ... Excellent collaberation! It's almost like you two... never mind
    to you both...
    Ken


  • Galaxy2
    October 4

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    The 'curvaceous sin' must be a wonderful experience....
    I envy the girls involved in the activity...
    Brilliant!
    Wet kisses honey!
    Galaxy2


  • Galaxy2
    October 4
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    The 'curvaceous sin' must be a wonderful experience....
    I envy the girls involved in the activity...
    Brilliant!
    Wet kisses honey!
    Galaxy2


  • Errant Panther silver member
    October 4
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    nice job using two of the prompt images, very passionate description of love and sensuality.


  • Woodchuck4400 silver member
    October 4

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    Great job. I like this one alot. You have done a great job with the imagery in this poem. It is a very good read from start to finish.

    Mike

  • Meroza gold member
    October 4
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    Holy cow this is hot mommie. Its burning, smoking hot!


    Best of luck in the contest!


  • notorious
    October 4
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    ANOTHER reservation? LMAO
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