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Desire's Student.

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Lead me
in dark desire
to fulfill sweet fantasy

I’ll submit willing
and wanting
to your touch
and teaching


innocent, so naive
masterful yet eager
tender caresses,
alluring & seductive

My appeal
pulls you in need
to stroke pleasurable
teaching to
taut aching flesh

I bend beautiful
under fingertips
imparting fever


intense arousal awakens
ravishing animal hunger
setting ablaze erotic desires

anxious & reluctant
guarded secretive
releases herself from
seclusion

liberated from
denial’s isolation
I surrender to
your thirst

Thrust hips in
craving as you
explore soft places
submissive


tongue probing deep pleasure
immerse fingers teasing
tremble virtuous

penetrating luscious
petals to moist
rhythm

Moans mount delicious
to catch breath
in wonder

writhing in
lust’s fixation
I release satisfaction
to sighs


contentment achieved
calm, in caring we breathe
leaving memories for
my sweetheart
and I to dream.

 

 

 

Author notes

italicized stanzas - kiwigirljacks
non italicized - Sensual Angel

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  • Reptile Lady gold member
    October 6

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    Hells bells this is awesome !
    Kat my darling this really is fantastic
    as was Kiwi..
    Amazing love it
    Mum xx


  • Rheea gold member
    October 4
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    ummmm oh you well the two of you well umm


  • Galaxy2
    October 4

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    The poem sets ablaze my erotic desire...
    you know how to seduce...
    I surrender to your thirst honey!
    Wet kisses all over!
    Galaxy2


  • JinSays gold member
    October 4

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    WOW.

    goodness
    gracious
    someone get me some water
    and a towel
    wow

    you two are somthing else. Damn it. Finding it hard to breathe here...LOL
    smoking smoking smoking hot
    jin


  • Errant Panther silver member
    October 4
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    lovely and sensual collaboration from two gifted pens. well done to you both.


  • Jeremy0826 gold member
    October 4

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    Beautiful, sensual and a wonderful thought
    for this picture my friends! Thanks a lot
    for sharing this one with me.




    Jeremy0826

  • KayJay silver member
    October 4

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    Wonderfully sensual... I think you and Jacks did a masterful job working together which is not an easy thing to do. Bravo to you both
    K


  • Cannonsfire gold member
    October 4
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    Well this is one scene that is just teamy and sensual, well done you two!!! Great job. Love, C


  • poppa silver member
    October 4

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    Wow indeed... wonderfully tasteful scene you two painted HOT! flow was spot on, and that is was sexy sexy pic... classy too


  • Sundown Dragon silver member
    October 4
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    ah god wow
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