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Reflection Of Self

Philosopher.

Innovative.

Bold.

Honest.

Poet.

Intelligent, in an artistic way.

Modest.

Respectable.

Innocent.

Wise.

Witty.

Smart ass.

Real.

Author notes

Inspired by a video response I saw on youtube about describing yourself with one word or phrase. Obviously in this poem, I used a few more words. I might add to it if I think of anything else. But, for now, it is what it is.

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  • penman gold member
    November 23
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Such a great creation. Thank you for sharing.


  • Desire gold member
    November 21
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    Wow~

    You know this reminds me of a brainstorming activity I used to do and boy was it FUN
    I imagine more words should be added- Heck-
    You have so many darn qualities-
    Heck my tongue~ is tied
    Very Creative
    Thank You for sharing Yourself and Voice~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet One
    Best wishes too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~

    • Arzab
      November 21
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      Thanks, Desire. This was actually lots of fun to do. It's very rare that I do a poem about self reflection. I tend to focus on things outside rather than within me most of the time. But, it's great to have a variety of styles in life, right?

      Thanks for reading.

      Haley Mary

  • Jalalbad gold member
    October 12
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    cute

    • Arzab
      October 12
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      Honestly not what I was going for, but thanks. :)

      Thanks. I didn't really plan on writing this as cute, but I guess it could be interpreted that way. Thanks for commenting.

  • Amera gold member
    October 11

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    You forgot, beautiful, sexy and most important; my AP sister who I love dearly.

    Love,
    Amera♥

    • Arzab
      October 11
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      Thanks, Sister Amera :)

      Sexy?

      I've never seen myself that way. It reminds me of what my high school friends would say that friends will see their other friends that way, but you never see yourself that way. But, thank you. That's a great compliment, Sis. As long as it's more of a compliment on my mind. I like to be appreciated for my mind and personality more than anything else.




  • ckwriter69 silver member
    October 6

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    hmmm I like it. Your not a smartass though, don't be hard on yourself, haha. I could add a few, though like beautiful, hugable, reliable, dependable, just for starters. Keep writing Haley.

    • Arzab
      October 6
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      Ha, ha. Thanks, Charley. you know what, I think you're right. I think maybe I'm just a strong woman who just isn't afraid to speak her mind and maybe I intimidate some people because of that. I think you're right on with the reliable and dependable. When I worked late nights at Burger King a couple years ago my co workers always gave me credit for being reliable and not ever missing a shift. I guess I can be too modest sometimes, eh?

      Thanks for always being supportive of my work. I appreciate it.

  • Dalaney gold member
    October 5

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    i can agree to every word you wrote (except for smart ass because i have never seen that side of you...lol) i like the concept very much! love, lane

    • Arzab
      October 5
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      Aw, thanks, Lane. Hey, believe me, I can be a smart ass sometimes. It's just that I don't show that side of me all the time. But, my parents always complain about that side of me. I think I annoy some of my subscribers by being a smart ass sometimes, too.

      Glad you liked the poem. Thanks for the comment.


  • Pure Thought silver member
    October 4
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    Just the kind of person i would choose to have as a friend.

    • Arzab
      October 4
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      Aw thanks, Buddy. I feel the smart ass part is something people may have a hard time dealing with sometimes, but it's good if people can look past that. Always appreciate your comments.

  • Olivia33
    October 4
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    Good stuff!

  • That is a great description of you.

    • Arzab
      October 4
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      Thanks so much. You know what's funny? I know I've been at allpoetry way too long when people comment telling me this says so much about me and I am thinking, they're right.

      Thanks for your comment.
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