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Bloodlust

Bloodlust and lust in general where not my only feelings for him,
Love,
Love was a definate surprise,
But I knew it the day I meet him,
The really wierd thing...
...He truly loved me...
...But he was taken away from me,
I loved him and now he was dead...
Ra, Why him The could have killed me instead...
I long for my lover even now

A Human!
They were all discusted,
And I tried to safe him,
Why do we always lose those we care about most in the World?

It is only now that he is gone I am alowed to say my goodbyes

"Goodbye. I truly loved you, and will never love another."

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  • ...interesting... not bad, I suppose, but it certainly is not the brand of darkness for which I seeked... thanks for entering...

  • Mgreen
    October 4
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    Vampires rule, I loved it!


  • ScarletFox
    October 4
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    Nice Sango

    very heart-felt. What brought this on? But anyways keep up the Great Work!


  • mysterywryter
    October 4
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    wow, really good.