She stood in the
foam of
ebby and flow,
moments of his love
at shores line,
trying to whisper
truth in his ear
~tide washed out.
A contest entry
- hesitation by going nowhere.
600 points, ended October 5, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Wow.. just brill sis!! Ahh, I've been there.
Well deserved gold!
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Beautiful, I can't say any more than what hasn't already been said.
Congratulations
Love
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absolutely beautiful... i loved the imagery in this.
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Wonderful piece!
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Excellent
Great expression in this poem. Breif but packed with mind candy. Great job. Don
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Beautiful and great imagery
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Excellent
Such a terrific creation for the prompt. so very well done. Best of luck in the contest
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You have got to be kiddin me, this is so wow !!!
Great writing, I don't know how you come up with such masterpieces. You talent amazes me sometimes.
Powerful... I really like.
Loveandblessings2u & yours always
Joyce
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wow
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