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regrets

so here i am thinking of the past
as sand slowly slides through the hour glass
why have i taken advantage of
all the ones that gave me love

now as i search into my soul
i pray it doesnt turn to coal
i have loved and i have lost
and have paid the worst of costs

now i think of the ones that loved
all i can think is what have i done
ive had everything ive ever wanted
by this memory am i now haunted

what can i do to right the wrongs
and turn them back into beautiful songs
o how i miss that melody
why cant i have that harmony

whats done is done and i cant go back
i just look forward to a better second act
i have learned my lesson in many ways
and on the way are better days.

first time writing in over a year and a half tryin to get back into it let me know how it is

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  • luv2dream gold member
    October 5

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    "what can i do to right the wrongs
    and turn them back into beautiful songs"..something about that line i had to comment..well..guess you can't..all that can be done is go forward..learn but not to dwell which i do see you say "whats done is done and i cant go back
    i just look forward to a better second act
    i have learned my lesson in many ways
    and on the way are better days. ".. great thinking..
    been trying to tell someone i love this and hope he eventually accepts the past too..glad you are writing again.