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IN FLAGRANTE DELICTO by efhjr.

IN FLAGRANTE DELICTO (c) Copyright 2008 by Earl F. Hubbard Jr.
(from MUTINY ON 'THE LITTLE STAR' coming VERY SOON!)

That's how I was found,
when I heard the news,
of Julie's victory,
in nothing but me shoes.

In flagrante delicto,
as she made her speech,
in me BIG brass bed,
on me way to Sugar Beach -

to a fine reception,
and an Inaugural Ball,
for a nautical inspection,
and then on to Albert Hall.

I'd sail to Albert Hall,
where I would be King,
of the universe,
and for a golden ring -

to wear upon me finger,
as well as for a crown,
as golden as the sun,
I'd wear in London Town -

as I rode with Julie,
next to Mr. Bones,
in a white Rolls Royce,
beside Davy Jones -

that's Davy from THE MONKEES:
Michael Nesmith - Peter Tork,
as well as Micky Dolenz,
who we'd ride with in New York.

In flagrante delicto,
with me future Queen,
a lovely British rose,
who taught me how to sing -

a sweet and sacred song,
to forgive the sins of man,
and to shine a light of love,
as only lovers can -

a light to change the world,
into a better place,
brighter than the light,
that shines on Martha's face.


efhjr.

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  • JinSays gold member
    2 days ago
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    I'd have never thought this would be about a rock and roll music group, but i'm glad it is. Sweet memories pour out here, and it's very nice.
    brighter than the light that shines on Martha's face.
    Wonderful,
    Love,
    jin


  • sunshinegirl
    October 9

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    Earl,

    In just yer shoes huh? Hmmmmm, sounds like, oh hell, you know What a read this one is! Sounds like we are in for a great party!

    and love

    Nyetta


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    October 6

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    Aw hun
    What a ride with those greatest of lads the Monkeysssssssssss
    Brilliant he did it
    Julie


  • maralisa gold member
    October 6

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    a wonderful poem elfhjr I love your imagery and rhyme your poems always paint a large smile on my face take care my friend maralisa


  • onesugar silver member
    October 5

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    You caught in the act hey sweetie LOL!!! What a sight for sore eyes you in just ya shoes

    The Monkees what a blast from the past, you'd fit in will with them getting up to ya monkey business LOL!!

    A pleasure as always loved the last 3 stanza's.
    Love you ~sugar~ xxx


  • Riftkin gold member
    October 5

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    Oh I love this, please please never ever stop writing these. you are amazing and I love the Monkees,
    have a few of their records here too

    Riftkin


  • Lily otv
    October 5

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    lol what a sight you must have been in just your shoes! I wonder if the monkeys were impressed but if they let you into their rolls royce they must have been ... either that or they wanted a good laugh lol. We'll watch out for you sailing up the Thames for the next leg of this trip.

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