Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Lightning Inspired Scars

Only constrained by the damned
Losing her moment to fall
Released when no pathetic sobs escape

The moonlite crescents in flesh
Illuminate her collapse
Till the silence falls like rain

Yet knowing heartbeats are the thunder of adolescent storm
Concealing lightning’s fatal logic
That inspires her to carve her flesh

Till the storm passes
Leaving the broken body
To carry the weight of day

A contest entry

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    October 5

    Edit | Reply

    Thank You For Entering

    Wow! talk about a brutal wriyte but yet I love every word of the poem I mean wow! im blown away. I cna't even state a real comment. nice work and good luck