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Attack!

I want to attack something!
Happiness is not a focus right now
Can only focus on prey
Those who enrage me
Who tick me off ever so slightly
I just want to annihilate with my own two hands
Or jaws

I can take these living conditions no more!
Life has imprisoned me
My own heart caged by society
But my time for dealing with these bars is up

These dreadful humans have done the worst
By having chained a free spirit

Now my rage is stored to its max
And my tolerance is low
I crave for something between my fangs

I just want to
kick
bite
punch
maul
tear apart
break
destroy
ATTACK SOMETHING!
...or someone

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I'm just so stressed and dishearted....

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  • HighRise Dusk
    October 6

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    Sure. Ill comment. I understand your feeling. I say the best thing to do is to get a bat or something of the sort and hit the ground as many times until you get tired. its the best way to relieve yourself from your anger. that was physically. mentally, just talk to others. sure, we might not be able to do anything, but just talking makes the soul feel better and lighter in a way. now, if you still want to attack someone after ALL OF THAT, go right ahead. i cant tell you not to, but i will tell you that if the cops arrive, act innocent (cause sober doesnt really work for you). pretend nothing happened. lol. so thats my advice.
    as for your poem, its....ok so i dont know how to put it but i will say that im happy that at least you updated. keep working on your situation and remember we are here to hear about your problems and ramblings about humans and how stupid they are. lol.

  • blondevamp
    October 5

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    Daughter i love you. so if you want to talk about this with me im here for you and if not i understand. i know what you mean. people, "humans" suck. the vast majority of girls are bitches and the vast majority of guys are dicks, not that i claim to be any differant but i dont do it to be perposly mean, i just cant deal with certain people and most people just act like assholes because they can, be cause they think there cool, because they think there way of thinking is right and one of these days i hope that they realize that they are sadly mistaken. but you cant always count on other people learning there leason so you can only count on the people you love and who love you back because in the end those are the people who matter, not the random "humans".