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Jack O Lantern.

Jumping out from the shadows
About to attack
Cooking up mischief
King of Halloween

Oh so scary

Lit up like a candle
And ready to pounce
Never afraid of the dark
Teeth so sharp
Engraved from a knife
Ready to take your candy
Naughty and never nice!

By Kiarna ---nearly 8 years old.

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Happy Halloween

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  • The Fun House gold member
    October 12
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    What a brilliant Acrostic, I love them. and you have written this one so very well....That Jack O Lantern is a mischevious little devil...... be careful when you go out to your halloweeen parties or he might catch you
    Hope you have a great Halloween and well done for this brilliant poem. Good luuck in the contest.



  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    October 6

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    This is a wonderfully creative Acrostic Princess, good luck in the contest my little Snuggle Bunny, love you always Mummy

  • jadeangyal
    October 6
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    Very cute. "engraved from a knife" was a wickedly clever line.

  • ea silver member
    October 6

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    Oh, you have a mischievous Jack on your hands here - ready to take your candy! He is indeed the King of Halloween - hope you have a lot of fun this year and can keep your treat bag out of his clutches!