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The Boat

We chase the flame to catch the smoke,  is this for 
real,are just a joke?
it starts off shiny ,then turns black,
have we gone to far that we cant turn back?
red ,white,& blue burn the flame,burn it all up and your to blame.
it claims the nerves and numbs the brain,
covers the hurt and kills the pain.
FLOAT A BOAT are burn a rail,whos the man ill never tell.
without the cut its pure as hell.
if its right away we go ridin THE BOAT that always floats.
puff puff whats the alarm, freakin & tweakin  is my only harm.
leave me be and you will see ,this is the path i didnt see. 
   




                                           

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  • trudy
    October 6
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    29 lines,and 6 are my favor
  • trudy
    October 6
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    what is your impression?