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Passions Flame




Fingers, lips and tongue
An exploration foray
Legs and sweat, intertwined
Seduction our bodies play

Hands caressing sweat kissed skin
Heartbeats sing in synchrony
Tongues that taste the passion
As bodies writhe in sexual harmony

Mingled breaths are released
Endless pleasure, untamed
Control is deserted as hands collide
In passions unrelenting flame



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Written 2006

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  • Dmonik
    October 6

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    A well written piece.
    I like how you set the scene, then slowly submerge the reader into the poem. Hot and seductive, and excellently written.
    Wonderful write hon

    'D'


    • NyteShade
      October 6
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      Thanks, I think I should write these things more often....sometime...maybe lol