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My Draconic Concept on Life

Humans are boring
But Dragons are great
Dragons are in the sky, soaring
While Humans are stuck to the ground by fate

Dragon determination is incorruptible
While Humans live in fear
The future is unavoidible
While each Dragon in pain, sheds one tear

While Humans corrupt
Dragons show mercy
Dragons can see
It`s time to interupt

Dragons hide in mist
With Humans unaware
And even though Humans throw fists
Dragons don`t seem to care

Only true believers can see
The Dragons hidden
Non-believers say "Dragons cannot be"
Because for them, to see is forbidden


Author notes

This is what I see life as. I don`t care what anyone who says anything negative thinks. This is just how I view it.

    I plan to revise this poem, please leave constructive criticism!
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  • Dark Otter gold member
    November 3

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    Dragons reign the skies!

    I am part of a dragon group and we extend an invitation to you: http://allpoetry.com/group/info/Lairs+of+Dragon+Poets+earning+the+Breath+of+Fire

    May your dragon grow old and wise in ways!


  • SulfurFiend
    October 13
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    great rhyme! interesting view on life...ibelieve mine is simalar...

  • Lae-Fire
    October 8
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    Great write Riku! Excellent flow and rhyme. Love it ^^

    ~Lae

  • your so called dragons will perish before the dark lord we will still your souls and add them to our power and we will put into extinction another being

  • nice

    Nice write Skinner. I actually really liked it. Keep up the good work.

    ~Kayla

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