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A poem for Katie

I am going through a tough time where true friends,
Seem to hard to find,
To keep my mind stable,
I am penning down all the thoughts in my mind,

Now that your watching me in heaven,
I don't want to let you down,
I want to make you proud,
What keeps me going is the thought of me seeing you,
Smiling on a fluffy white cloud,

Right when I needed you,
You were right there to understand,
The best memory of you and I,
Was the first time I held your hand,

In all the time of knowing you,
Not one moment was ever dull,
If there is one thing you taught me,
It was to live life to the full,

I was going on a downward spiral when we met,
You were there until the end,
And helped me all the way through,
Katie I meant what I said it was an honour to be friends with you

All the time we spent together,
You made me see the world oh so differently,
One of my most treasured memories,
Is the day I saw you smiling back at me,

Now that times seem like there at there hardest and your not here,
I often want to cry,
It was an honour and a pleasure to know you Katie,
Rest in peace and goodbye,

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This is a poem dedicated to Katie Taylor Who Died of a rare form of skin cancer at the age of 15 She will never be forgotten. I chose the back ground because she loved animals.

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  • SexySuma
    October 6

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    So sad!! I almost cried!! *hugs* This was amazing!! I dont know what else to say other than WOW.
    Loves


  • SeptemberFaith Greeters member
    October 6

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    "Seem to hard to find," I think between to and hard your missing the word "be".

    God only lets us keep His most precious Angels for a short period of time. They come here and change the lives they were meant to change.. give to those they were meant to give... and then they go back to be with God.. there job here done.

    I am sorry to hear that you have lost one of your best friends, she gave you something no one can ever take away. Cherish those lessons, those memories... and share them with others.

    Criss

  • xDemonicxAngelx
    October 6
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    Oh lord I'm crying This was so perfect, and the background thing, oh man. This is a wonderful dedication to someone that means a lot to you. I'm sure she would have loved this. You did an amazing job with this, you really did.

    My heart goes out to you for writing this beautiful dedication. Keep up the good work.

    Take care
    *hug(