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Remembering

loves sweet kiss upon your lips
passions caress,
from tender words across those same lips
desires flame
from your loving hands
the warmth inside
from a love that never dies
I can still feel that ache deep within
missing you lips and that soft sweet sigh
hearing you softly say good night

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  • ckwriter69 silver member
    October 19

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    Nice love poem, yes those golden memories, nice flow and tender words. Thanks for sharing it. Keep writing Teresa!!!!!!


    • Tears of Roses
      October 20
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      Some times when there is no hope; all we have left is the memories to keep us going.
      Thank you Charley.
      Roses to you

      Teresa

  • plainoljoe
    October 11

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    It's good to hold onto memories such as this but only when they don't intefer with the future

    Joe


  • Blueskywonder
    October 7

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    Such a beautiful passionate feel to this loving piece of poetry expressed with a fine and detailed elegance.

  • i can't even begin to think about what you did here, it is truly something golden and all you, keep it flowing
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