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The Soldiers Bible

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Have you ever seen a soldiers bible, 
in-cased in metal and colored gold.
Often the pages have become loosened,
from all the use out in the cold.

It's pages  are smudged ,
from the fingers of heroes today.
And within unusual bookmarks, 
blades of grass or a leaf often stained. 

Pictures of loved ones you often find within,
and memories of home and love brings a forced grin.
Many of our soldiers can bring this bible to life ,
when was the last time you looked into a soldiers eyes .

A place where a child became a man,
trembling and the knowledge of foreign lands.
Have you taken the time to give them a hug today,
for keeping all that violence from our country for such a price they do pay.

How many of our soldiers spoke to God while under siege,
in the rain and heat and the forever threat whispering God please.
Times where they know for a fact God intervened,
and saved that soldier from certain death it seemed.

I have one of those metal Bibles my husband brought home,
even today at times I see him with it for only he does know.
That through his time in Vietnam God was so aware ,
and saved him from the enemy as he stood in the devils lair.

 

As he lifts that little Bible there is a look in his eyes,
of the times saved and the horrors of many a night .
The bloodstains on its cover from comrades lost he prays,  
and the soldiers legacy holds their spirit-es in a hearts embrace and  the wind beneath their wings this day .

Author notes

This country with all its love and differences so needs to know for our boys to do what they must do to keep such violence from within our country we must care for them all when they come home for so many enjoys the safety and the benefits of freedom yet many in this country also shows disrespect and for this to happen is unforgivable for without their bravery you wouldnt have freedom you wouldnt be able to sleep at night or go outside without fear . For those who thinks its so cool to disrespect our soldiers I think maybe they need to be drafted and then see how quick their minds are changed for their freedom would be lost while fighting for their life for to understand you need to see it with your own eyes

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  • bellatrix27
    November 19
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    Moving

    This was so beautiful I literally got tears in my eyes. My cousin was in Iraq, and recently came home to see his son who had to leave when the baby was two months old. I cant tell you how happy he was to be home w/ his family, but he certainly still has his war memories.

  • condor gold member
    November 10

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    This was a magnifiscent poem and dedication to all those wonderful souls who protect your freedom and way of life. I thought this piece really provoked thoughts, to sit and think about what was given...and what was not on their return. I cannot say anything to this other than, damned beautiful write. It made me teary. Today is rememberance day/ veterans day and a time to pay homage to these souls, but i pay homage all year round. Thank you so much for this incredible piece of work, and God bless you and your Hubby.

  • mew2
    November 8

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    This was nice and soft I liked the line, when was the last time you looked into a soldiers eyes, itwas calming, I also liked theline how many soldiers spoke to God while under seige,, they must have been asking god for help


  • Nymph-Angel
    November 6

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    God bless our troops and God bless America.

    Yes I know the majority will blow this off as a cliche and not really realize the brutal truth to it because unless you've actually been there in that situation and lived through it you can't truly see how important it is. Things become cliches for a reason. It's because they're true. These men and women die so you can have the freedom to criticize and degrade what they are DYING for without any consequenses for what you say. Read a few books, brush up on a bit of history. We didn't always have this priviledge we now take for granted and it is definately something worth fighting for.

  • JackNapier
    October 25

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    vietnam was a true horror and president kennedy was trying to bring them out of vietnam of course that was unamerican to keep pulling out soldiers from the war said president nixon but it's untrue most of the wars that we have fought have no point in them and we send innocent people to get slaughtered out there so they can fight for the freedom of their country i think all of that talk is starting to become drivel and this war we have now if obama becomes president i hope he does take them out of the war it might take awhile but i want him to do it


  • R S Adams Jr silver member
    October 24
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    I love poems about soldiers and loved ones

    This is particularly emotional and embraces the thought of God in our wars...a horrible place to be, but where we need him a lot.

    If I were picky, I would edit a little with the use of OFTEN four times in the first three verses. It stumbled me a bit, but that is personal choice.

    Beautiful work, with a lot of feeling and in depth thought.


  • Wind Whisper
    October 15
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    very good poem


  • heart shaped box
    October 10

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    I like this very much.
    Very well executed and expressed.
    It is tough to imagine our loved ones over there fighting for our country and there lives,
    and we all appreciate them and I appreciate your words.
    great poem


  • Abe 1
    October 8

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    very movin
    touchin a heart with those at war
    gd poem Patty
    cheers abe


  • maralisa gold member
    October 6
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    a beautiful touching poem


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    October 6

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    Heartfelt
    Beautifully written piece that touches a heart
    as battle continues through out our world today
    Julie


  • Katie Lazette
    October 6

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    God bless you Stories. You are right we need to praise, support and honor all of our Military. Thank them for our freedom. Thanks for sharing this poem with us all. Katie

  • I have a hard time with people who disrespect what these men and women do. It's because of them I or you can sleep comfortably at night.
    I loved this poem. Sometimes God is their only hope when they're fighting. That Bible can mean everything to them. God Bless them and God Bless you for writing this!

  • emc2
    October 6

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    Wonderfully written

    You did a wonderful job. I am now crying. I dated a guy in the Army just recently and we broke up because of deployment. He was afraid that if something were to happen to him, I would never date or look at another guy. He really hasn't been all that religious, but everything changed with the thought of deployment. We are really good friends and it really helps him to talk to me. This poem reminds me so much of him. I love the way you wrote this poem. Wonderful job.

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  • Okay, you just made me cry..this was amazing and sadly beautiful.
    I could see this as my own son standing there with the bible...the imagery you gave me was so vivid.
    I guess the ones who don't understand will just have to fake it. We know better the pain and cost of freedom.

    Love,
    ~Lisa~

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  • Symphony
    October 6

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    So beautifully written, I already know that I am going to multiple applaud this at the end of this comment

    Am also going to offer a little proof reading, I hope you do not mind they are all just suggestions of improvement, you don't have to take me up on them

    "Have you ever seen a soldiers bible,
    one in-cased in metal with a color of gold. "

    //

    "have you ever seen a soldier's bible,
    Encased in metal, and coloured gold."

    |

    "And within unusual bookmarks,
    often blades of grass or a leaf often stained."

    //

    "Often containing bookmarks so personal,
    Including printed prays that they silently pray."

    |

    "when was the last time a soldier did you look into his eyes ."

    //

    "When was the last time you looked into a soldier's eyes."

    |

    "and saved that soldier from certain death it seamed." <-- should be seemed.

    |


    "As he lifts that little Bible their is a look in his eyes, " <-- there, not their.

    But, just small suggestions - mostly it was just breathtaking. ♥

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  • Mama You are teriffic!! I don't know how you do it!! Where did you learn to write so well!! You do a most fabulous job!! This is so amazing!! I know it came from your heart although everything you write does!! You did a very very beautiful job!!! You portrayed this so well!!! You have a very lovely flow!! This is outstanding!!! All your words and all your lines go straight to the heart!! You really did a beautiful job!! I love it!!!
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