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Black coffee.

Seems like forever ago
was just yesterday
feels like your heart
can't bring my soul to change
& no matter how fast you run
I'll always be miles ahead

You like your coffee black
and your women pale
you don't desire anyone
you can't have.
Your mind is set upon a goal
and you reach it by tomorrow

I fell in love with you
the moment you stepped
into that cafe
you caught me staring
and smiled a hello

Tonight I am in your arms
& our clothes are spread across the floor
kiss the back of my neck
and I muffle a more

Don't you notice the hold
you have on me
The girl who says no
now can't bare to leave


And baby, it's no matter how
lovable you seem
cause by the end of the day
you're nothing but a dream

Author notes

this is actually a song. But music is in fact poetry, amirite?
i sang this when i was walking, and had to jot it down.

Give me advice, critisize, i want all the comments i can get

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