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J aime coudre

J- just because you are having a bad day doesn’t mean it will never get better
a- an angel will always be in disguise, help those in need, for they may be one
i- in every bad moment there is a bright side, look and you will see
m- many people have been corrupted with money or valuables, do not let yourself be one of them
e- enjoy you life as it is, don't waste your time on wishes or "what ifs"

c- consider yourself loved, by those around you and those you have only briefly met
o- only you can steer your life: grab hold of your reins and ride hard
u- under summer sun, you have walked, talked and loved. Remember those moments and cherish them for years to come
d- don’t ever let anyone tell you that you can’t have or do something, for if you want it bad enough, fight for it and seize it when it is yours
r- realize life is too short to hate people, go out and be friends with the angels, the nerds, and the bullies
e- enter your birthday with heartfelt wishes from me and all on AP, with hugs and kisses from family, and joy all around!!!

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  • J aime Coudre silver member
    October 17
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    Thank you for the birthday wish...


  • catz Moderators member
    October 16
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    Ahhh... now you've completed it And such an impressive piece, too. You've touched on many of life's aspects with this meaningful, well written acrostic.

    Thank you for entering and good luck, I know she'll appreciate this very good piece, written especially for her

    Dee


  • catz Moderators member
    October 9
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    I'm not sure you've completed so will wait until later to comment


    Dee