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Hell on Earth



Punished through all the ages
Naught but pain and sorrow
Picking bones by creatures vile
Death over and over again alas
End me for I suffer in this Hell
Stop my beating heart stilled
Let me draw a breath no more
Kill me please and let it halt
Stem the flow a deluge of pain
Raining down on me from above
Torment is my lot in life I know
But will I continue in this Hell on Earth?

M. Pinnell

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  • IrishGypsyRose silver member
    October 6

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    Oh, Dark Indeed

    I like it. I have a few of the dark moments and poems myself...It flows and has wonderfully dark imagery. Good write. Dark is good sometimes, it helps you appreciate the light more. gypsy