The one i love who loves drugs more.

Blood shot eyes and a slur i don't know.
I played it off like it was cool but i realized what was happening to you.
I love you then like i love you now. All i do is wonder how was what i did or something i said. i wish that this was just all a dream. i don't wanna lose you your the best that i ever had. i just some times that id just drop dead. were i would have to suffer watch you go threw a trauma like this. So please try and stop this...

To the one i love.

Plzz help i need a poem for my class...

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queen
October 8
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welcome to all poetry
Hi kitcat11

Drugs have a way of getting hold of someone and not letting go I have had a few relatives like this, in the end the only person that can help them is themselves I wish you all the happiness life has to offer. Writing is a great way to let your feelings out
Barbara
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LionessK
October 7
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welcome to allpoetry
Such a sad situation. I hope it is not reality for you.
I think what would help this write the most is to break up the lines a bit. That way it would flow a little easier. A few grammer issues...
not sure what you meant in this line:
"All i do is wonder how was what i did or something i said."
You have a good start here. Good luck with your class. Keep writing on.