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Edge of Nightmares

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Goddess lurks at the edge of nightmares,
her darkest thoughts unfrozen by hatreds
glare - her prey is nearing patiently waiting
she licks her lips in anticipation never to
know the prey is her own sister

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Prompt: Picture
Picture Credit: http://ivannia03.deviantart.com/art/Frozen-98694541

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  • Valley Girl Greeters member
    October 13

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    Awesome twist in the end! So chilling woah! Defintely gotta watch your back lol! Great take on the prompt Twin! Congrats on the HM!


  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    October 11

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    I didn not see this coming at all, well damn that is not a way to treat your sister, mine would kick my royal arse lol. Well done on a great interpretation of the prompt hun. x x x x Congratulations on your shiny green


  • UnityHope
    October 7

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    well then... wasnt quite expecting that ending.
    very well done babes and good luck.
    ♥ Dani


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    October 7

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    This is a great take on the prompt, good ending. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.


    whisper

  • Ylova silver member
    October 7

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    WOW! Amazing take on the picture! Wonderful! I loved this piece of yours. Amazing imagery even without the picture. Well done Looking forward to reading so much more

  • DolphinLass silver member
    October 7
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    very well worded and very descriptive, good luck


  • Poetic-Theorem silver member
    October 7

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    Hun
    I love these piece as it speaks volumes in just a few lines. Moreover, the ending was indeed a shocker

    Wonderful write and briliiant take on the prompt
    Wish you the every best
    Love you

    David

  • Well i didnt expect that. this is brilliant. GL

  • Angelflower Greeters member
    October 6

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    OH you did a wonderful job! I loved this! The ending is kind of like a shocker!! lol. well done! best of luck in the contest..

    Angel
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