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Fighting The Bullet

A heart of heaven, loomed in blood
and scars. The sun gone, my eyes dead,
cold surrounds me, death begins to take
me away.

Destroying myself, seems to cleanse the
pain inside. But only destroying those,
around me who care. Facing my nightmares
one by one, my demons vs. self murder.

Alone Im standing in the middle of darkness,
crying for what little might be left, in vain.
Fighting the bullet with every weary step,
I have, to just see if one more day; everything
turns colourful.

Author notes

Ever faced your longest night alone, fighting the bullet....its scary to know if you will see the darkness turn into the sun.

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  • The FaeQueen
    October 28

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    GOOD!

    Exellent write!
    "Destroying myself, seems to cleanse the
    pain inside. But only destroying those,
    around me who care"
    I like these lines because it shows that even in the mist of despair one cannot be selfish!

  • DaySlayerNightPrey
    October 9

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    I especially like the line "Destroying myself, seems to cleanse the pain inside," a lot of people just don't seem to understand that.. it's nice to know someone else does..

  • XxI Broke MyselfxX
    October 8
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    O.o, I like it! I culdn't peg a specific line or anything, but I really like it!