It has been a rough day
I hide in my closet
Tomorrow will be better I pray
I need to feel it
It's my own curious ballet.
I wear long shirts so they don't know
But I know they have a clue.
But the passion for the steel grows.
I lie here in a pool of you.
Author notes
option 2
A contest entry
- A Cold Night by cut13roses.
600 points, ended October 12, 21 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think?
Comments
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aw ouch
i hope this is only for contest and not what is going on,
well none the less good work and much love hun.
vanna -
I totally empathise. This is a different way of looking at it, but also very true, I feel. I like the metaphors
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I like it
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