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The Man

The man said
that he was
your friend
he said he
wouldn't
hurt you
I didn't
know how
wrong I was
to tell him
where you
were He
said he was
your dad and
that your
mom was
dying. He
wanted to
make you
happy. He
said that you
and your
mom had
had a fight
I had no
idea how
wrong it
was. He
said your
mother's dying
wish was
to apologize to
you well
now thanks
to me I
guess you're
dead!

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