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The Party

We went to the party
your boyfriend was there
the two of you
went into a room
so I had a drink
or 3 or 4 or 5
I started to black out
you came and said
it was time to go home
so we got in the car
I was driving
but then I blacked out
you're dying now
and so am I
I wonder if we hit someone
I can't get out of the car
I start to hyperventilate
I'm blacking out
I call your name
You don't answer

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