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The Trip

The truck was a mess
the girl was tired
but it didn't matter
she was having fun
then all of a sudden
everything changed
the car pulled out
from nowhere
nothing was there
then suddenly
SLAM!
She was lying
in a pool of
blood with no one
around to help
her. She knew
she was a goner
so she took
one last breath
and closed her eyes
then she was gone

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