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The Void

This feeling I feel
is one that I hate
the void inside
keeps growing
I'm dying inside
and nobody cares
I miss mjy emotions
the happy feelings I used to have
It's all gone now
there's nothing left
just a big hole in my heart
The tears on my cheeks
feel so fake
and foreign
even to me
I don't cry
Only wusses do.
So what does that make me?
A loser?
A loner?
A worthless piece of shit?
Names I've been called all my life
and rightfully so I suppose.
I'm dead inside
why can't I be dead outside as well?
Somebody please, let me die.

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Written November 25, 2006

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