I haven't been writing much lately
because I haven't really felt the need
But now with Anaiya's return
I'm scared out of my mind
She's always trying to kill me
or trying to make me kill myself
I don't know what to do anymore
I hate trying to figure this out
I hate living life with her here
She went away for awhile
Why couldn't she have stayed
where ever it was she went.
Why'd she have to come back?
I'm not sure what to do anymore
Somebody help me please
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Written November 28, 2006
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Other than a few typos there really isn't much of this poem you need to revise as it seems to me that you hit right at the heart of what you are feeling. Nicely done, very nicely done as a matter of fact as without even knowing what you are going through personally I feel you have let me, the reader, inside.
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Thanks for the comment
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