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Winter

Winter time has come
and I feel the sadness sinking in
something doesn't feel right
but I'm not sure what it is
chilled to the bone
I feel so alone
so far removed
from everything
like my feelings
are insignificant
and like I really don't matter

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  • Writerbaby666
    October 30

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    Sad

    You will always matter and if not just to me you'll always matter to Mitch now (I know this is an old on though...)