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You're There

I know you'll
always be there
when I need
to talk
no matter
what else
happens
I hate that
you're leaving
but I guess
I'll just haev
to learn to
live with it
I love you
you mean so
much to me
you'll never know
just how much

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  • Writerbaby666
    October 30

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    I like

    I don't think I know who that one is for unless his name starts with an A... There are a couple spelling errors but I still liked it a lot =D

    • Punkette
      November 2
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      Actually, not Andrew. This was actually written pre-Andrew. Amazing huh? It was written for Jared. He switched schools for our freshman year, and I had a huge thing for him, and it was all a mess. I was a mess at that point though. Hell, I was a mess all through high school.