The days are getting shorter
and so are my years
nobody but me knows
that December Thirteenth
i will end my life
I will go up that roof
and go back down
i cry for you to see my pain
i try to show you my signs of shame
but still no one knows
that December Thirteenth
i will go up to that roof
and right back down
but to never get back up
to those old school rooms
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really good i love it and its weird cos december 13 is my bf's birthday
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good write!
I really like the title, and overall this is very good. The one thing, i might change "i go up that roof", maybe just insert "to" between go and up, or "i climb up to", just sounds a little odd. nice job tho!
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