I held you close
And looked into your eyes
But what came next
Was an unexpected surprise
You shot my heart
And I fell to the ground
I could feel it beating
But in seconds my heart wouldn't pound
You dashed into the kitchen
And grabbed the knife;
With a few stabs,
You took your own life.
I guess it's the way
It's meant to be
Us together forever
Just you and me
Tell me what you thought. I don't care how critical.
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i love this poem!!!!!!!!!!!
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incredible.
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Hmm JA!
i can't help but to read this over and over again. Makes me want to cry but in my book, that's so not me at school. Lol cry when i get home. -
It's very...dramatic. well-written.
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Excellent
Wow this really explains what being together forever means in my book. This made me feel happy to have someone there with me at all times. My favorite part of this poem was With a few stabs, you took your own life. I guess it's the way it's meant to be. Us together, just you and me. Amazing. You rock out loud.
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