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#21 Give us Great Dreams

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Fashion show with a school design.

Whom experienced the silence.
A fading trademark near the throat.
 

Awaiting there for the sleepers.
Show up anywhere everywhere.
On the right time at the right place.

 

Chat up the weather and traffic.
Cycling through the central park.
Sailing through the Victoria.

 

Nothing to bear nothing to dare.
Thy dove eyes enthrone thy fine art.
watching delicately divine.

 

Nothing to hide nothing to ride.
Ponder the surrounding full stop.
Reflect on an inner comma.

 

Author notes

Credit to Alison Thomas my high school art design teacher from Lynfield College, Auckland, who has supported me in all this years.

 

Also give thanks to Bruce Young my creative writing & drama tutor at Framework Trust.

I really hope this poem could help training the new generation.

An empty train station, giving me a feeling that everyone had caught up with the last train. And of course I am missing the train I used to catch. However, It is always hope that the next train is coming.

How do you discript the Vodafone logo?

    I plan to revise this poem, please leave constructive criticism!
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