Let me bleed,
let me cry.
Let me grieve,
let me accept this.
All of this.
Is it acceptable?
Is what I am doing okay?
I can't fuck up anymore,
I don't know the right way.
I don't know what to do,
I don't know what to say.
I am too young to be dealing with this,
I am just a kid.
Let me do what I need to do,
let me think what I need to think.
I am strong enough to handle this,
I think.
But I don't know anything,
I don't know the future,
only the past.
Hope is the only thing I have now.
Is that always going to be the way?
Will I ever know an answer,
to a question that I have?
Will I ever know right from wrong,
or is it a lost cause?
Let me bleed,
let me cry.
Let me grieve,
let me accept this.
All of this.
Author notes
Grieving,
I am so confused right now...
I feel really alone.
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This poem catches and holds the readers attention. Superb Job on this poem!
Good times are ahead, look into the future - not in the past!
BE HAPPY!
Great write, and good imagery!
Keep 'em coming!!
[ { much respect to all my fellolw writers and readers on AP } ]
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i can so relate to this, im just a kid myself and trust me ive made so many mistakes i dont even know what to do anymore, honestly sometimes i think im only capable of making mistakes. i love the fourth stanza of this, as well as the one you repeated. this is really good
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i can really relate to all of this.
good job
and thanks for commenting my poem
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*holds tight*
grieving is good...just..please..don't grieve forever....
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you are too young-I send what ever I can for your needs God I lost my dad when I was 18 and it took ten years to finally deal with it. I feel for you.
your friend
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I am here for you you are not alone just dont forget that people care hang in there take care of you best wishes always
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Darling, you /are/ too young. You're a kid who was forced to grow up in half a year... and that sucks.
beautiful poem, btw....
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