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Gourmet Love

Gourmet Love

By: The Red Cat Jazz of Love

 

I want to build a tribe of passion with you,

and watch your smile have a heat eruption.

Because this is what original love feels like,

when you awake from the sun light of good

resting emotions. I have to be your back bone,

because the harmonica of my poetry cry

will be a coward, and I couldn’t arise me

as a women of flesh so soft and tender with the

emotional traits to feel pain.

So, I am feeling like loving you,

So let me be,

the joy of your love,

and help you except to balance the Unknown.

I here today open the mountains of my heart,

so drink, close your eyes don’t even think,

let me think for you, I am your vice president .

So when the lint of worries get to heavy.

Its my job to secure you,

hold your hand .

Because you have looked behind you,

And you saw me, as the wife “God”

with a answer to love struggles and anxieties.

The joy of love is nothing except to balance with it... the Unknown.

 

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Julia Clark

 

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  • Humm..this is very beautiful poem and its flow catches the attention of the readers because of its softness of the thought..I love it..thanks for the wonderful entry...

  • ears2hearyou gold member
    October 8

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    you waken us with your beautiful sensuality of
    poetic beauty and soul....lovely layers to enjoy
    in your poetry!
    well done sister! well done!
    ears/Seattle

    . Rewarded 4


  • faderman1959
    October 8

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    cat you have such a unique use of metaphor that is so great! I always look forward to where you will take us next. Nice!

    . Rewarded 4


  • Levesta
    October 8
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    another wonderful write here sis wow i could never grown tired of poetry when reading your work


  • hotchocolate gold member
    October 7

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    A poetic tribute from your heart....I Love it!!!!

    I have to be your back bone,
    because the harmonica of my poetry cry
    will be a coward, and I couldn’t arise me
    as a women of flesh so soft and tender with the
    emotional traits to feel pain.
    So, I am feeling like loving you,
    So let me be,
    the joy of your love,

    . Rewarded 6


  • D Saul So Sexy
    October 7

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    this further let me know why we getting maried i will be the last man standing so get ready for a divorce you mine remeba dat iight! love this poem

    . Rewarded 4


  • Swangrnv gold member
    October 7
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    very nice

    a sweet dedication to your main squeeze! way to show your strength in honor of your man my friend!


  • Ms Sexy silver member
    October 7
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    ooooooh I sooo love this girl. It is dance art at it's best

    • lol this was a poem b g i wasn't ready i was battling with the piece writers block sexy thanks i like the pic as well
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