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ROSALIE by efhjr.

ROSALIE (c) Copyright 2008 by Earl F. Hubbard Jr.
(from MUTINY ON 'THE LITTLE STAR' coming SOON!)

I frolicked with a mermaid,
whose name was Rosalie,
on me way to me reception,
in the middle of the sea.

She had seaweed hair,
and shiny seashell eyes,
with a figure to die for,
to me sweet surprise.

She pled with me to stay,
when it was time to go,
for she had fallen for,
me great BIG heart and soul.

She took me to her garden,
and to her chamber, too,
where she made a pledge,
to join me royal crew.

I held her and I kissed her,
before I realized,
she had been transformed,
right before me eyes.

With her sexy legs,
she climbed onto me ship,
declared she was prepared,
to take a mystic trip -

to Nirvana Island,
to sail from sea to sea,
she's a lovely British girl,
me mates call Rosalie.

efhjr.

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  • maralisa gold member
    October 12

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    a brilliant poem earl your imagery is great and your rhyming huray for the brits thank you for sharing take caremaralisa


  • sunshinegirl
    October 9

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    Earl,

    Sounds like another beatiful addition to the "Little Star" indeed... Me thinks you are gonna need a bigger ship before long...

    and love

    Nyetta


  • Riftkin gold member
    October 9

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    This is so beautiful Earl, you know your rhyme is great and the story just keeps getting you more aboard your ship, .. now where do we all sleep again..

    Joann

  • I like it it reminds me an old sea chanty

  • Reptile Lady gold member
    October 8

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    Another sweet poem
    The rhyme is wonderful as is the way you paint the story of Rosalie
    Us Brits rule
    Best wishes
    Julie


  • onesugar silver member
    October 8

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    This was just beautiful Earl. Your words created a beautiful picture with a wonderful enchanting mystical feel to it. Who could help but fall for your great BIG heart and soul We have a new British mate onboard. Whoohoo the more the merrier I say, as always this was a pleasure.
    Love you ~sugar~ xxx
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